move raincloud to high balcony in colosseum

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INT. THE COURTROOM - CONTINUOUS
INT. THE COLOSSEUM - HIGH BALCONY - CONTINUOUS
Rain, alone on the throne with BD on the cushion, does not smile. He lifts one claw. Across the void, inside the now-sealed bubble, a brass-latticed hive at one upper corner of the iron cradle stirs — **bug-drones**, tiny brass bodies with blue rim-light at the wing-joints, swarm up in a cloud and stream through the last dilating seam of the aperture an instant before it seals completely.
/* A new presence-box for Rain, carved high into the colosseum's outer ring — above the topmost tier of the chorus bleachers, set into the stone wall, Catmull-Baroque ornament framing the aperture. No seat up here. A narrow gilded railing. Direct sightline down to the sand floor, the iron cradle, the sealed bubble, the chorus beneath. */
Rain, alone at the rail of the high balcony. Tail-tuft hanging over the stone lip. Wings high and folded. Green eyes fixed on the bubble below.
He does not smile. He lifts one claw.
Down on the sand, inside the now-sealed bubble, a brass-latticed hive at one upper corner of the iron cradle stirs — **bug-drones**, tiny brass bodies with blue rim-light at the wing-joints, swarm up in a cloud and stream through the last dilating seam of the aperture an instant before it seals completely.
RAINCLOUD
(to no one, quiet)