diff --git a/Story/0BattleRoyale.fountain b/Story/0BattleRoyale.fountain index a439b72..957d8ac 100644 --- a/Story/0BattleRoyale.fountain +++ b/Story/0BattleRoyale.fountain @@ -418,9 +418,15 @@ The aperture ripples closed behind her. CUT TO: -INT. THE COURTROOM - CONTINUOUS +INT. THE COLOSSEUM - HIGH BALCONY - CONTINUOUS -Rain, alone on the throne with BD on the cushion, does not smile. He lifts one claw. Across the void, inside the now-sealed bubble, a brass-latticed hive at one upper corner of the iron cradle stirs — **bug-drones**, tiny brass bodies with blue rim-light at the wing-joints, swarm up in a cloud and stream through the last dilating seam of the aperture an instant before it seals completely. +/* A new presence-box for Rain, carved high into the colosseum's outer ring — above the topmost tier of the chorus bleachers, set into the stone wall, Catmull-Baroque ornament framing the aperture. No seat up here. A narrow gilded railing. Direct sightline down to the sand floor, the iron cradle, the sealed bubble, the chorus beneath. */ + +Rain, alone at the rail of the high balcony. Tail-tuft hanging over the stone lip. Wings high and folded. Green eyes fixed on the bubble below. + +He does not smile. He lifts one claw. + +Down on the sand, inside the now-sealed bubble, a brass-latticed hive at one upper corner of the iron cradle stirs — **bug-drones**, tiny brass bodies with blue rim-light at the wing-joints, swarm up in a cloud and stream through the last dilating seam of the aperture an instant before it seals completely. RAINCLOUD (to no one, quiet)