diff --git a/Story/Beanie.md b/Story/Beanie.md
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 ### Identity (physical-form)
 
 - **Sex:** Female
-- **Age:** Unspecified; maturity reads socially competent, playful, more grounded than the chaos around her
+- **Age:** At least drinking age; maturity reads socially competent, playful, more grounded than the chaos around her
 - **Birth Year:**
 - **Birth Place:**
 - **Ethnicity:**
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ Carefree / casual — the pierced-chipper silhouette does the work.
 ### Accessories & Props
 
 - Piercings (canonical vibe cue)
-- Felt-tip / eyeliner pencil — used for dot-marking piercing candidates; occasionally visible clipped to a pocket or tucked behind an ear
+- Felt-tip / eyeliner pencil — used for dot-marking piercing candidates and is occasionally visible clipped to a pocket or tucked behind an ear
 - **Weekend tumbler** — beat-up insulated cup, sticker-layered past the point of reading any single sticker. On-canon contents: vodka (with whatever mixer is closest). In the arena she has no tumbler, but the hand occasionally drifts to the hip where the grip should be — a small continuity tell
 
 ### Era / Period