From 5094926bc26c5784ea59296e9cd3b8c7e57e3a55 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Raincloud Date: Sat, 30 May 2026 10:12:13 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] redrafting from last night --- Story/0BattleRoyale.fountain | 9 ++------- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/Story/0BattleRoyale.fountain b/Story/0BattleRoyale.fountain index 31ff2be..7501dca 100644 --- a/Story/0BattleRoyale.fountain +++ b/Story/0BattleRoyale.fountain @@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ Beanie is already coming — a knife in each hand, beanie straight, grin intact. She plants her back against Azure's and they take one synchronized step to the side, neither looking at the other, both knowing. -Above them, a rush of feathers: Agate ascends off the plinth in one strong beat, banks hard, touches down beside Azure with a longsword she has pulled from one of the higher pedestals. Wings fold tight. The single mint eye flicks to Azure, to Beanie, and then out, scanning. +Above them, a rush of feathers: Agate ascends off the plinth in one strong beat, banks hard, touches down beside Azure with a longsword in her mouth which she has pulled from one of the higher pedestals. Wings fold tight. The single mint eye flicks to Azure, to Beanie, and then out, scanning. AGATE (quiet) @@ -575,12 +575,7 @@ Pact. Short and simple. No betrayals, no surprises. We stick together until it's AGATE Kindness where possible. -STARBOY -(instantly) -Kindness where possible. - -AZURE -Kindness where possible. +Starboy and Azure both nod once, in solemn agreement. They look to Beanie. BEANIE (one beat slower, amused)