no 'they' in singular, other pronoun policies

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@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ Keep in mind the baseline from *Character Read*: Rain is **cold by default** and

 - **Source:** same local HTML export as in `Jenni.md` — **do not commit**.
 - **Story utility:** the **patron / client lane**. Only DM where Rain is not sovereign, not analyst, not confidant—he is a **paying customer** managing a freelance artist he **chose because she earned it**. Lets writers put **business-Rain** on screen (invoices, PayPal, deadline slippage, cross-promotion asks) without dragging in court dynamics.
- **Backstory hook (important):** Jenni got through to Rain by **not being immediate or pushy**—offered interest, waited, and only after a while proposed an exchange of services. That approach is what **won his respect** and **got her the commission**. Contrast with every other creature who tries to pitch themselves on arrival; almost all of them fail this exact test.
+- **Backstory hook (important):** Jenni got through to Rain by **not being immediate or pushy**—offered interest, waited, and only after a while proposed an exchange of services. That approach is what **won his respect** and **got her the commission**. Contrast with every other creature who tries to pitch himself on arrival; almost all of them fail this exact test.
 - **Dynamic:** warm but firmly transactional; no flirtation, no approval-seeking from Jenni, no study-reflex from Rain beyond one bio-poke at her inflation-art line. Cutesy `:3` surface sits on top of normal freelance vendor behavior.
 - **Contrast:** Agate / Adrian / Starboy = personal (peer / co-presence / specimen); **Jenni = commercial overlay on chorus membership**. Her *public* presence reads like any regular's; her *private* exchanges with Rain are off-camera commercial business, and the fruits of that business—the emotes, the sub badges, the set dressing—are everywhere on display.